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All I Know (a villanelle)
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All I Know (a villanelle) |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
All I Know You're all I know of raw desire; With each caress and fevered kiss My arms become as liquid fire. Not for sale to any buyer, My passion is not spent amiss; You're all I know of raw desire. Your touch is all that I require To bring me to the edge of bliss, My arms become as liquid fire. There is no other I admire, no other lover I could wish. You're all I know of raw desire. Love will always know a liar, My lips speak truths you cannot miss. My arms become as liquid fire. Your satisfaction I require So I again give in to this; You're all I know of raw desire, My arms become as liquid fire. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very captivating flow of passion! Love, Margherita  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear Beki, "all I know" is that this is one fine villanelle and I appreciate the effort that you put into writing it!   EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you did well with this form and the content was nice as well |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
very loving and passionate |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah this is SO well done Beki! Very much enjoyed...love this form. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
thanks so much everyone for your generous response. I too love this form but it is not easy....so I also love the challenge |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome Beki: A wonderful, inspiring villanelle for sure. Such symetry...such verve! TD |
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