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Keeping Sigh
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Keeping Sigh |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Pleasure sheets me in its folds this morning Following impressions spirit made to shade and covet Sensations visit cleave and curve in their exploring Trellising my prints, replacing a too warm discarded Yawn and stretch, the limbering of smiles breeze this wilderness Rich in tawny glow…my mind follows paths of me still new Discovery of where your spirit travels in my heart Quick silver pausing just to take my breath away Refreshing myself in scents of bedside silks Sipping nectar of the night left lingering in moon petals That slide caress upon my neck, arched to savor longer The sun casts light to lead me still warm Into the wet of dream showers and all my skin remembers Subtle starts the day at play, just audible above my heartbeat Copyright Kkh 5/12/04 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can't put my finger on it, but you have a style all your own awesome write! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Into the wet of dream showers and all my skin remembers Subtle starts the day at play, just audible above my heartbeat warm and fuzzy as the brink of dawn, lost in hazy feeling, yes awesome style as always |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Everything about this is silky smooth~ BUT there's something about that 'tawny glow' that stays with me~ 'Rich in tawny glow…my mind follows paths of me still new Discovery of where your spirit travels in my heart Quick silver pausing just to take my breath away Refreshing myself in scents of bedside silks Sipping nectar of the night left lingering in moon petals That slide caress upon my neck, arched to savor longer' Oh, it's a *sigh* alright~ Lovely~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Kathleen -- I could just imagine the feeling -- passionate and beautiful poetry!  ......jo |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
a warm and soft feeling. comfy  loved this. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice write! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sensations visit cleave and curve in their exploring Trellising my prints, replacing a too warm discarded Yawn and stretch, the limbering of smiles breeze this wilderness ~*~ woman's wilderness... a very wonderful sigh write, Kathleen... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
This is full of so much rich lavish imagery, like: "Pleasure sheets me in its folds this morning" "Yawn and stretch, the limbering of smiles breeze this wilderness Rich in tawny glow" "my mind follows paths of me still new" "Quick silver pausing just to take my breath away" "Refreshing myself in scents of bedside silks Sipping nectar of the night left lingering in moon petals That slide caress upon my neck, arched to savor longer" "The sun casts light to lead me still warm Into the wet of dream showers and all my skin remembers" Absolutely stunning! |
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