Open Poetry #32 |
Saturday's Musings...Senyrus |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
(the first one is about "any Friday") Saturday’s Musings (if your guitar’s keyed-up) work, labor, savor you could be poor, sad, forlorn buck up, it’s Friday ferns, soil, garden spot stand in shade where not too hot sunburn prevention clematis status coiled about the post, a toast beauty’s paradigm coffee-cup morning leisure onset to the day remember the chores catkins’ philander stretched across sofa’s backbone never a dog’s life ©May 15, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, I'll seek the lighthouse evermore. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Every sensational Saturday starts with a great plan! Loved this. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
would read better without the copyright dates beneath each one but good write! |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you both! And p.s.....good suggestion!!! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
I like the last very much |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Did you write this for me? Sigh .... Beautiful thoughts and insights. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I enjoyed each and every one! VAS writes senryus That appeal to one and all. Reality checks. EA |
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