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Dear Lover
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Dear Lover |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Dear lover, Did we not share something that late october morning under the sun's labored return in the dissolution of midnight the sky brushing its embers off the trees, holding us newborns, saplings cradled in their kingdom, did we not embark on adventure blindfolded, strangers, bound only by mere shreds of mutual premonition thrown together flowerchilden victim to the random winds of change and did not our spoken silences write picture stories on cerualean skies you held me, in hand and in heart, stitched together etchings on tumbledwood trees, i visit there on whims of time while the wornout moon does hide as you sleep, beautiful boy, in your dessert hours, we flew, our wings sewn as one sparkling on the sky as the dawn rose, had not the transcendence of this many seasoned dream come to the face of its recognition perhaps the heart would not feel such the harshness of your silence |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
What lovely golden thread TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Michele..I started to choose certain lines and stanzas that were my favourite..but, I ended up with most of the piece copied down. This is so beautiful..yet has a sad feel to it. Love it! Extremely well done. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
beautiful  Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Inkedgoddess -- this was such a tender, beautiful love letter.  |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
had not the transcendence of this many seasoned dream come to the face of its recognition perhaps the heart would not feel such the harshness of your silence Oh yes! I feel sadness for the desert boy who could not take in such passion. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I have no words...the use of imagery, vocabulary, thoughts, and feelings here combined, make for a stunning piece of work! btw, love the new pic  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Came back for another read....and WOW!! Love the new pic Michele! Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thank you for your kind support of my work, always appreciated to be amongst you fine poets |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
There is beauty in your sadness and it radiates with each and every word. Silence may not always be golden, but it sure makes for good poetry! Just as pretty as your picture~ Hugs Michele~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This beautiful poem has a fairie touch to it. You are magical, even in your melancholy. And me too I love your new picture. Sweet, strong poetess. Love, Margherita |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, I couldn't find a favorite part... I love it allll!! It's so beautiful, lady.  Hugs Ethel |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
yeah...yeah |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I do believe that you be more a Goddess of the Flower Children than a Goddess of the Inked Ones! lol "thrown together flowerchilden victim to the random winds of change and did not our spoken silences write picture stories on cerualean skies" ~ I truly love to read your poetry! You have a gift. Love & Light, Linda |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks again for reading this and giving your thoughts on it |
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