| Open Poetry #32 |
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Love Song |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Pretty, pretty, pretty... the poem and the poetess! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful soulful song here Dawn... Lovely this... Lovely you. Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Love the way you sing my sweet poetess. TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful presentation |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
A very beautiful poem. ~*Patricia*~ |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice song indeed! Beautiful. JL ![]() She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ So very pretty is this~ *Huglets* ![]() ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And who will resist the siren's song, when it's presented with such grace and charm as yours? Very beautiful, dear Dawn. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I echo the above sentiments. Smile -- Susan |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh This Diamond? she does sing beautiful. this is a keeper. Maree xx ![]() The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colour, but the sea, does not change. |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
*ticks box to keep, takes notes* cool piece of writting buddy. enjoyed this one muchly. |
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MGROVES![]()
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was beautiful |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
that was cool. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
A fine beautiful poem..thank you. Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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garysgirl![]() ![]()
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Dawn, this is so beautiful. I love the picture, the form, and the words. Aren't these fun to write? Hugs, Ethel |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Bittersweet unity of feelings, images and thought...So very evocative......~P |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful |
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