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for someone special |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
I cast my shadow upon you and embraced you in my thoughts My soul surrounded your pain it became my pain my tears washed it away cleansing all evil that touched you within |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Wow. Susan |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very good writing, Marsha. Hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou this is for our shadowy one [This message has been edited by MGROVES (05-12-2004 10:38 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha So few words can say so very much. Take care.........Sue I am in motion |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 oh!!! You should have put a hanky alert on this one...OH!!! tears of joythis is SO SO SO BEAUTIFUL!!! What will I do with you? You touch me like nothing ever before...I can't even explain... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you dixie, you touched my heart and soul and brought my spirit back to life just by reaching out with your ever so kind heart. when i needed an angel. i didnt want to live anymore with what is done to me.it never stops. here or not. but the stronger i get, the more i can put it to an end. as should of been done long ago. so no one else gets hurt. ive had many in my face, on phone, believing his lies, then when he does them as me, they take it out on me. never him. your on the other side like them, but your not like them. you have a heart and soul. i understand your relationship with what he was. and i learned you cant blame them. well maybe some of the skanks he brought home. LMAO i cant explain what you did, but you saved me. in more ways than one. i hope you understand. i am getting emotional tonight. ah maybe a good poem will come. thank you and this is yours, i wrote it for you |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marsha, this is absolutely beautiful and deeply compassionate. The image you evoke is very touching too. Dixie Girl, it's good to know you felt the love embracing you. Love, Margherita   ps  I am so busy, I can't be here often.I miss you too!) |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou M |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling at the compassion that grows through sharing...  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
had to come back this to this once more...and I know I'll keep coming back... I'm saving it to my library! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and it takes someone very special to do such a loving thing...  ~ May you both be loved and protected and feel no pain. Love & Light, EA |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you all |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
So very nice! Way to go! JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What a truly compassionate and beautiful poem this is. .....jo |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
This was as concise and precise as it can get it. Enjoyed! |
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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
i can feel the warmth in your words  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Four stars...James |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankk you all for your replies. especially the shadowyone who touched me like an angel and help me see and get the strenght i needed. thank the rest of you here too as you too have helped my growth |
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