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Wharhol's Gift to Morrison
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Wharhol's Gift to Morrison |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes 
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The Golden Phone is ringing Answer it Talk to Him The One on the other side He is listening Waiting Enduring Demanding an explaination As to the waste you've become Are you scared Do you feel it Fear Hate Loathing For the chances you've missed Opportunities gone You were given as a gift To use or ignore Look inside See the reality What you have become Is it what you were meant to be Has the gift So lovingly given Been lost Squandered Abused Ignored The Golden Phone is ringing It is time to pay If you dare Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
...I'm stunned....I feel this poem on every possible level. wow and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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KristieSue
since 2003-01-31
Posts 1460PA, US |
Are you scared Do you feel it Fear Hate Loathing For the chances you've missed Opportunities gone You were given as a gift ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yes... feel em' all for many different reasons. Not because I intended on wasting the gift, but because it was taken from me. Many awesome opportunities have past... and I pray daily that I can do my gift again one day. awesome poem, a bit too close to home. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee "I am...the LIZARD KING!!!" (another favorite line is: "You killed my duck!") I do believe the golden phone gift is factual--and I too, was quite taken with the depiction of that--a direct link to God is indeed a ponderous gift. Could be a good thing, or NOT.  Enjoyed this'n Ringo dude.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Jesse- Thanks for the kind words. They are appreciated. Kristie- Work hard, pray daily, and take your vitamins... If it doesn't work, at least you'll be healthier lol. thank you. Karen- SOMEONE GOT THE REFERENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!! I was actually wondering if anyone would. And when he ACTUALLY killed the duck was SOOO cool. Knowing that a talent suck as yours enjoyed it makes it worth while Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"Knowing that a talent suck as yours" Um...a talent suck as mine?  Izzat one of them Freudian typos? LMAO... give me grief, will ya? Why I oughtta...  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
uh oh.... you made the serenity leave the room, Ringo...  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Man... It seems that SOMEONE on this board is having a really, not so great day.... lol First there was that thing with... and then that area where I... and now THIS!!!!!!!!!! Karen, if I promise to slap myself across the knuckles with a ruler, stand myself in the corner for an hour and then send myself to bed without dessert, would you promise to come back??? Please???? Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
aw, Ringo, you know by now that I'm crazy. c'mere and gimme a hug.  |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
EEEWWWWWW... Girls... COOTIES!!!!!!!!!!!! lol Whenever I feel blue, I start breathing again... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That's it. I'm taking my cooties and going home. hrmph. Oh. I am home. sheesh.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
Altho he was a little before my time, his music moves me,,,as does this poems truth,,,very good man I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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