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Open Poetry #32

Candyfloss Illusion

huddersfield
Junior Member

since 2003-12-29

Posts 25
huddersfield, England

0 posted 2004-05-12 12:17 PM

When the cherry blossom is falling,
Creating the candyfloss illusion,
Of a distant far of realm,
Covering the path in the pink of petals,
And masking what lays hidden beneath,
So maybe we're not knowing what we actually percieve,
As we look down upon our steps,
Where buried breams,
may or may not breath.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-12 12:38 PM

the imagery is great in this

love the ending lines

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-05-12 12:44 PM

ohhhh this was so good, very much enjoyed

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-05-13 05:07 PM

Yes, I agree. Very much enjoyed the imagery with the thoughts of just what might be beneath the surface of the blossoms.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

4 posted 2004-05-13 09:00 PM

This one made me think.. and as I thought, I thought of many situations to which this applies. Enjoyed.

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