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A river called Poetry
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A river called Poetry |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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A River called Poetry Slowly I let the words slip o’er me Their structure smooth in flow Of a poet’s passions and prayers The rapids of emotion grow And this ship, my mind Which sails across the worded Sea Reveals vast oceans of thought And alternative realities A heart slowly breaking A sorrowful acre tilled A sharing of silly laughter A soul touched and healed The river of imagery runs deep Through lands of truth and myth Words tumble as polished stones Washed down the waters swift And the current of this river In its honesty and its breadth Buoys my world weary self The poet’s most precious gift S.A.T. I do so enjoy immersing myself in the work of so many talented poets. Thanks to all for sharing. |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
How impossibly perfect! I loved this poem, especially as I read it after indulging myself in poetry for two hours. How fitting. And the current of this river In its honesty and its breadth Buoys my world weary self The poet’s most precious gift and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Absolutely beautiful....and thank YOU for sharing with us. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Incredible write! Thanks for cheering us on, too. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Exquisite thoughts put here in the deep blue! Thank you.  ....jo |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Susan: The capture of these golden thoughts is impeccable. Each line, each word, each verse flowed just as the river does inside. Absolutely wonderful write.' TD |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
and thank you for sharing yourself |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yes it is a river where we all do meet upon |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Susan I'm sure each and every one of us can relate to your fine words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. "The words of a poet can speak volumes 'tho no words are actually spoken. He has the ability to make a connection with the heart" Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes thank you for sharing, and listening to this flowinging river of emotions. that runs through pip |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Great writing, your Muse is flowing beautifully! Thank you ~P |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Susan~ 'And this ship, my mind Which sails across the worded Sea Reveals vast oceans of thought And alternative realities' 'worded Sea' ... oh my ! I LOVE THIS~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
this is beautiful...this is what PIP is for me as well...reading poetry refreshes my weary soul as well.......wonderfully written |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you everyone, in more ways than one.  Susan |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Know what I've seen lately? So many poets writing so many good pieces... it puts my muse away...  I've been wanting to comment on this...read it three times...but was that busy and couldn't get to it. Making time tonight to catch up with the ones that make me say... I wish I had written this... |
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