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Here's to life
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Here's to life |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Atop my roof I view the world A tiny spec in giant swirls of matter, gas, and planets alike Atop my roof I feel a breeze The coolness puts myself at ease I've never felt so pure, so real Atop my roof I think of all Surviving on our tiny ball of fire, water, wind and rock Atop my roof I shed a tear In joy, because I hold so dear Life, such a precious thing But at this moment I am just me A peice of this living harmony Finally I set down my pen "Here's to life" I say again and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
When we get perspective, all things seem to find their proper place. Well done! |
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MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
Atop my roof I view the world A tiny spec in giant swirls of matter, gas, and planets alike Loved this |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"But at this moment I am just me A piece of this living harmony" This is so regenerating in it's simple truth. Wonderful rendering here. TD |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
For a moment, I felt I was there with you! Thank you -- what a joyous way to start the morning! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have a lucid view of the world and beyond!  "Here's to life" ~ I'll toast to that!  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it is good sometimes, ey? I need to go find a scenic place that makes me feel that way |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Hip-Hip-Hurray! A salute to you too! Great write. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
When I was much younger, I sat upon my rooftop... the rooftop was the 4th floor of a row-type apartment building in the city of Pittsburgh, and even if you wouldn't believe, I had almost the same exact feelings as what you expressed in these words. Enjoyed. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Hear, hear! I love days when it feels like this. Enjoyed. Susan |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Atop your roof seemed to me, the perfect place to be. :-) enjoyed the read. We all should have a place atop a roof, even if its not! pictureme :-) |
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