Open Poetry #32 |
I feel tired ……………………… |
MERCURY Member
since 2003-04-16
Posts 190Ireland |
There’s such a chill rummaging through my lean body. Each bone that I possess trembles in the dark, As if someone is walking over my grave. Time has no bearing, Nature non-caring. The only god here is that of survival. Slowly I edge towards safety. My brain computes an uneasy calm, But my walking frame seeks total respite. Logic dictates if I rest I will fall. Memories of youth inspire, While evil forces around me conspire. The snowstorm now is relentless. Mercy is officially outlawed. Naively I thought white was the colour of peace. I feel tired ……………………………. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good one! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
believe it or not, I understand |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
enjoyed the feel this one... |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very good |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Naively I thought white was the colour of peace"" ~ in understanding of this..... ~~**~~ |
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