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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Of Offers Packed with feathers of a dove Offered on a velvet glove Placed nearby a glass of wine I offer you this heart of mine. Within it is a host of dream Living in a world of seem Beating at a rapid pace Standing with a rose and lace. Wont you take a ride with me Within the fields of greenery Drink the nectar at its source Steer the star of lovers course Sail with me a life’s peruse A lifetime of a lover’s cruse Take my hand and wedding band Stay with me on Samarkand. It is the Shangri-la of noon The whole of earth and with the moon. |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
All the girls will swoon over this one A romantic poem done so well Enjoyed Gloom |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning Sy! Or should I say *SIGH*  "It is the Shangri-la of noon The whole of earth and with the moon." Lovely lovely this morn's read m'friend. Very much enjoyed...now where are my smelling salts.  ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hmmm...I had a reply... but it took off on a tangent and I haven't seen it return...   |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the Shangri-la of noon *sigh* what a beauty for a first morning read...tranquil and serene...like a soothing cup of sweet tea!!! Lovely |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
'tis the season... ~K~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The whole of earth and with the moon. ======================== ya hang the moon and make me swoon sweet-Sy-guy... what moth could refuse such a Randy romantic offer.  *ww*    I love you more the further I go ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooooooo lovely imagery here! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I will take a ride with thee, Within the fields of greenery, And gaze upon a crescent moon While you croon your poet's tune. ~ My goodness, you are one very romantic sonneteer! Isabel's a lucky lady!  Angel hugs, EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Professor, Do you really think so. LOL Nancy, Thank you for the lovely, Sunshine LeeJ Sweet reply, thank you. Kahlil Yes it is. LOL JM, Miss you tink, WWRS passing, Love the reply. Earth Angel Love you too. Hugs |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Seymour, if she refuses this offer, I think she would be nuts! Enjoyed the lovely poem and am swooning! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
iliana You are a doll. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Beautiful, Seymour. Very romantic feel. You know I like. Hugs, Ethel |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ethel, Thank you sweet Glad you ejoyed |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
it's good to hear a true romantic. wishing ---- sigh |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES Thank you for the read and comment. |
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