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3 Men Hangin... |
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sean_krazy Junior Member
since 2002-09-14
Posts 33 |
3 Men Hangin... I’m one, Please let me down… I will rise up and apologize I will let her stand up and slap up Where is my disguise? Those little eyes, Eyes are, eyes are…let me cherish ‘em Let me escape… And I will cherish them again… Keep, keep breathing Sin won’t show sorrow to you. You, cherish little? Cherish little, eyes? haha Paine I’m in two. Let me go will you? I won’t go with him Yesterday I woke up from your dreams, Pack, Pack and get dressed And I will go… Come back without you, And put everything in its right place… Oh god, there are, Two colors, Colors in his head… Why have you lived for? I’m very blue… I want to rise up, Eyes are nice but dreams are portable. To be born to a virgin, I, I am proud… by Rajan... Hey guys, sorry it has taken be a while since i posted an poem. its been a long time. i didn't want to write poems any more because i get deeply emotional over matters. but now, the fever has taken on...I hope you enjoy this piece...i wrote it out of anger...frustration, disgust and distress... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Rajan, your write suggests you are in great pain. I wish you to overcome distress and rise up to more peaceful planes. Margherita |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Enjoyed this write. Keep writing... post to others work as well. Stay in the loop, your writer's voice will grow stronger.  |
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wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
keep up the writes, and your strength |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
enjoyed this, could feel frustration, can't wait to see more of your work |
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