Open Poetry #32 |
a view from the floor (reconciling whims) |
serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Genie am I sparking this snap o'finger smack of lips drifting through an old keyhole laughing knowing that this is what it was in "used-to-be" bulbs in burst of the marquee begging to begin again leaving prints of fingers rent hedging movement through the glove relent a middle finger blown by the glossy lips -goodbye- a smile a prancing in the breath dancing of me wishing less and more-- that I could stay... again laughing at the death, my friend bidding welcome at the door cradling these eyes of glass... I'm a genie's circumstance-- reconciling whims. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
serenity, You do have a way of reconciling. Enjoyed |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Incredible you are Gorgeous.. Mxx Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Genie am I sparking this snap o'finger smack of lips drifting through an old keyhole laughing knowing that this is what it was in "used-to-be" bulbs in burst of the marquee begging to begin again leaving prints of fingers rent hedging movement through the glove relent a middle finger blown by the glossy lips -goodbye- ============================== *smiling at you* theres so much here to see between the lines...I do so love the way your poetic mind works.... love the imagery in this Sen...tis like watching an old fave movie late at night. leaving prints of fingers rent yer so kewl! ... and it's you ... you ... you ... you ... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool write K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You are amazing! Did I say that before? ...ok..just said it again! Love ya lady~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
It is refreshing to me how you see things for what they are! From the floor!! Yes!!! Very cool slant, Ms. Serenity~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
drifting through an old keyhole laughing knowing ~*~ grinning winking at you knowing |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Truly, a talented writer! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
SereneOne, my friend, your writing never ceases to amaze me......just like you. Love ya, lady hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
you are truly talented |
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