Open Poetry #32 |
With the Title Comes... |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
With the Title Comes... For my mother, I offer the shoulder and open arms, that her mother would have for her, if only she was here. For a mother to know that only these moments now matter, these moments of time that will slow to a halt in the next week and days thereafter. And maybe now I can understand the hardship it has brought, my fighting with her to get her here before it was too late. My week of screaming through every pour, trying to understand the "want not" of it all. For I am not a mother, only a sister, an aunt and a daughter and shall never know the enjoyment of, nor the trials that come along with the title. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Maureen, A good write enjoyed the read. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
For I am not a mother, only a sister, an aunt and a daughter and shall never know the enjoyment of, nor the trials that come along with the title. somehow you do know, regardless of title, just being a human being in tune with those around her |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Maureen, bless your heart -- I do understand -- I have been trying for several years to get Mom to live with me. She refuses. It is so hard for them to not want to be a burden and yet want to have us near. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
M, My great-great aunt Jewell mourned that fate. I'm not sure I ever helped her understand how much she mothered me in her old age. The comfort is in those you love and I know you do that well. Peace, dear friend. A lovely write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Just being who are is what's important...enjoyed the write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
if only she was here...yes...I know |
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