Open Poetry #32 |
The Lovers Through the Ages |
CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
The Lovers Through the Ages He and She — the Lovers whom Ages Have not aged; to them granted the role By the Hand that writes Life’s pages And opens a portal — soul to soul; Lips to lips; where passion rages — Where it collects its rightful toll. And in that nearing of the lips The greatest paradox is seen — A perfect stillness of the World — Yet, all rushes by — that which has been; That which is yet to be — all swirled Into the whirlwind of Life’s eclipse. So imperceptible the grace Of the first kiss, so softly taken — As a playful leaf in light embrace Of the autumn wind, gently shaken — As an early morning dew will trace The petals of a rose awaken — And yet — this tender, sweet caress Will forge new life from rock and air, And will to all the Worlds express The Love that He and She will share — For it is You and I — we possess The Deed — each are the Lovers’ heir. CG |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
CastleGuard Enjoyed the read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice...passionate and romantic |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful..very much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Great love poetry! Enjoyed! ~ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Well written, CG, especially like the last line. Corinne |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Sorry if I am addicted....only three poems and I am hooked..but I guess I was hooked after the first one.... You are inspiring me..... ~Love and Hugs ARH Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very beautiful love poem. I like your style of writing. Hugs, |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
I must agree.... "And in that nearing of the lips The greatest paradox is seen — A perfect stillness of the World — Yet, all rushes by —" Odd how the world stops when your lips meet, yet, the kiss is gone in an instant, even if it lasts for moments long. Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
CG I am beginning to see that you are a master craftsman when it comes to writing about affairs of the heart. Once again your words were very much enjoyed. Take care........Sue I am in motion |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoy your well deserved popularity poet...I am pleased to find your works collected for our enjoyment. Will read on. TD |
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