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Open Poetry #31

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spartacusVSwhitefang
New Member

since 2004-01-25

Posts 7

0 posted 2004-01-25 10:00 PM

I am no longer animal or man
animal breaths untill no longer can
my breath is not gone but held
untill the creator of life comes along
and untill that day, i pray and know
that if i was man i'd still be wrong
men don't know of waiting between breathing
they breath, they sing, they breath
if they knew how i knew how only my wind blew
they'd not sing for long but grow
and grow and grow then one day I'd hope
that they too would know which gusts would blow
then two winds might one day crow
oh the singing of the song shivers us
and we just dance that dance
threw, spin, drift and snow.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2004-01-25 10:02 PM

Welcome to Passions.
Your poem is alive...and wonderful.
ThisDiamond

J.Samm
Member

since 2004-01-12

Posts 415
Iloilo City, Philippines

2 posted 2004-01-25 10:22 PM

welcome to the forum! interesting first post. deep and meaningful.

spartacusVSwhitefang
New Member

since 2004-01-25

Posts 7

3 posted 2004-01-25 10:30 PM

thanks, i'v never thought of posting on a forum before. It seems like a much better idea than reading it to a friend who has no interest in poetry.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

4 posted 2004-02-24 12:25 PM

Welcome, SpartacusVSwhitefang -- this is a wonderful poem -- took my breath away for a second!

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