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Tim
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since 1999-06-08

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0 posted 2004-02-08 11:34 AM

The prayer’s been said, so let’s all eat,
Please pass the tires, they can’t be beat,
Try a Michelin, for it’s a treat,
It’s really tasty, almost like meat.

Now radials are tough and gooey,
With steel belts they’re kind of chewy,
All weather tires now they’re p-ewey.
They leave a taste and chew sinewy.

So I suggest the baked retread,
Just watch for nails and eat some bread
It helps the glass in tread’s inbed,
Now eat it all, then you’ll be fed.

For dessert, what can I say,
The only choice, hub-cap souffle,
The best of course are Chevolet,
Our meal’s now done, so ciao, Good-day.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2004-02-08 11:39 AM

Tim
LOL enjoyed.

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2004-02-08 11:39 AM

Tim, this is a write that I call a "chuckler".... makes me chuckle and
grin a little as well....

Thanx for the humor...

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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3 posted 2004-02-08 11:40 AM

Tim, I think it's time for you to re-tire

Youngatheart
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since 2003-12-30

Posts 333

4 posted 2004-02-08 11:45 AM

Thanks for the smile this morning.
Teehee to your reply, Balladeer.

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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5 posted 2004-02-08 12:04 PM

Tim, this is cute.......
made me smile big.

Hugs

Ethel

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since 2001-08-14

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Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-08 12:32 PM

Cute write Tim...thanks for the chuckles.
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-02-08 12:36 PM

...may I road-hazard a guess
that this is as charming a write
as you intended?

Too cute!

Martie

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8 posted 2004-02-08 12:38 PM

Tim

You do, do honor to the tire. Thanks for the smile.

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-02-08 12:57 PM

lol

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

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10 posted 2004-02-08 02:21 PM

I realize I was driving on thin ice with the poem but sometimes the rubber needs to meet the road and sidewalling will not provide the necessary traction for a smooth ride on the highway of freewheeling poetic driveability, or as you might say this response is entirely without treadlife being as bald as the tires on an unemployed teenagers dodge dart and needs to be parked.

but I do appreciate the responses.

Sunshine

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11 posted 2004-02-08 03:48 PM

LOL...I think that response is as good as the poem!!!

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

12 posted 2004-02-08 06:12 PM

Left me with a bloated feeling. Ha Ha! Grover.

Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11

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13 posted 2004-02-08 06:42 PM

Tim,
I appreciate your creativity and humor--it's great. A little spice does one good!
Sadelite

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