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Slightly Screaming
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Slightly Screaming |
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Masked Intruder
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since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets 
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a capitalization of sorts is knocking around inside my tepid dreaming fascination and it's ticking away in slowmotion sleep drawing me down and down and down into an inevitable upward spiral pushing red buttons and beeping bright blue lights and creeping with the slight flicking of a tongue along my spine but I'll settle into a deeper euphoria crying complacency in your wailing glares inappropriately dying of shredded decency and fading fading away -*-*- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I interpreted this in two ways. One made me laugh and grin, the other, cringe. I think I'll settle in on the first one. Enjoyed seeing your name on the screen, don't see it often enough. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Nice write! Grover. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Masked, An interesting write, enjoyed. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Me too.  If it weren't so damned cold I'd kick down the walls. I'd prolly just hurt myself anyhow... ARGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH... my skin's been crawling so long you'd think I would have gotten somewhere by now...  "drawing me down and down and down into an inevitable upward spiral pushing red buttons and beeping bright blue lights" sigh. "but I'll settle into a deeper euphoria" Got any extra? wah. chuckle? loved the poem. I'm unserene today.  (and it's okay folks--we're friends, so he's used to this.) |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Actually I like the title best of all.. interesting write. |
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