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David2
Member

since 2000-03-22

Posts 407

0 posted 2004-02-06 10:04 PM

Especially for you

Each moment spent in haunting solitude,
Reveals a lasting love of no neglect.
If loneliness may not be misconstrued,
No man may ever question its effect.
Lest anyone mistake a sullen heart,
Or wonder at the loss of joyous glee,
Until the present emptiness departs,
I'll pine the loss of loving endlessly.
So patiently I'll wait to own her all,
Enduring ebon nights and empty arms,
Despite what circumstance may yet befall,
Assuring this, the comfort of her charms.

Let perseverance be my daily guide,
Yet will a love so strong be not denied.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

1 posted 2004-02-06 10:12 PM

David, this was eloquent!

Tim
Senior Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

2 posted 2004-02-07 04:30 PM

unlikely a finer poem will be posted today, enjoyed much.

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

3 posted 2004-02-07 05:41 PM

A fine command of words! Grover.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2004-02-07 08:56 PM

David~
Such a beauty to read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2004-02-07 10:07 PM

(sigh) Oh David, soon enough the perserverance will pay off and you will be rewarded tenfold in blessings of loves promise, yay, God Bless You, keep the faith, this is a precious sonnet, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet David, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-02-07 10:21 PM

Very nicely penned and much enjoyed!
Hugs~

~ I like not only to be loved,
   but to be told I am loved ~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-02-08 05:25 AM

how beautifully romantic

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-02-08 08:33 AM

A love so strong asks to be lived.
Beautiful verse.
Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

9 posted 2004-02-08 03:34 PM

Remarkably and unmistakably expressed.
TD

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2004-02-08 03:36 PM

Very good writing, David.
I enjoyed reading.

Hugs

Ethel

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

11 posted 2004-02-08 10:17 PM

Special words, from a special heart...

~Enjoyed

~ARH
love and hugs

Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

12 posted 2004-02-09 08:20 AM

"Until the present emptiness departs,
I'll pine the loss of loving endlessly."

wow...h

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