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Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-01-25 09:22 AM

January 25, 2004

Trees are pricking
Heaven’s skies
Roads are streaming
Silver swells
Hawk is settled down
From his flight
Far and away
The church sounds bells

Oh glory in
The skies that cry
Tonight one horn
Of a buffalo moon
Will hide behind
This ghostly gray
Spring is promised,
Sounds of soon

Still the time
Of days to weeks
Carry forth in
Months to come
My face gladdens
In the rain
Deep inside, my
Heart in hum.

For this feeling
Inside my soul
Sounds of waiting,
Quiet rebirth
I would dance
Upon the brown
Soon the green
Will cover earth

In my wait
Patience, found
In my heart,
Hope rebounds
For my eyes
The gray will part
In tomorrow
A promise starts.

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

1 posted 2004-01-25 09:27 AM

"The gray will part
In tomorrow
A promise starts"

I hope so...Beautifully expressed Karilea.

believe in what your heart feels...

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

2 posted 2004-01-25 09:30 AM

In my wait
Patience, found
In my heart,
Hope rebounds
For my eyes
The gray will part
In tomorrow
A promise starts.

This is delicious! Groundhog's day is but around the corner, for all of us who "believe"...Ha! I bet he doesn't see his shadow this year...wishful thinking.

McLean

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-01-25 09:47 AM

Good morning Sunshine,

Tim
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since 1999-06-08

Posts 1794

4 posted 2004-01-25 09:49 AM

Watch the roads today Sunshine, they might be a bit slick, enjoyed the poem.

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2004-01-25 09:49 AM

In my wait
Patience, found
In my heart,
Hope rebounds
For my eyes
The gray will part
In tomorrow
A promise starts.

For weeks now, I haven't found hope, expecting the worse because it seems to find me. Oh, I so wish those gray skies would part...where is my patience? As you know, I had so little of it to being with. Tomorrow...I am looking forward to the promise as the ice storms upon the pane in the now.

I believe in you and tomorrow.

I took this one to my heart, K. Beautifully done.

Patricia

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-01-25 09:58 AM

Ah yes dear Karilea..
'After all tomorrow is another day'
and the clouds will part and the sun shall shine.
Much enjoyed this morning's read.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter..
I found there lives within me,
an invincible summer.

choshi
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since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

7 posted 2004-01-25 10:02 AM

Oh glory in
The skies that cry
Tonight one horn
Of a buffalo moon
Will hide behind
This ghostly gray
Spring is promised,
Sounds of soon

Oh yes, and what a slice of moon that was piercing the ink sky last night...your promise of spring warms my heart this 7* morning....~C

SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

8 posted 2004-01-25 06:34 PM

There is always hope for something new, with each tomorrow that comes our way.

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

9 posted 2004-01-25 06:41 PM

It's a lovely day when the heart is dancing inside.

and?

Excuse me, but I think the witch in you is showing...

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

10 posted 2004-01-25 06:43 PM

(smiles) Spring shall come as they say "March winds and April showers bring May flowers!" (big angel hugs) The seasons never lie, God Bless You, this is a wonderful poem of hope, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"You'll find something that's enough to keep you
But if the bright lights don't receive you
You should turn yourself around and come back home" MB20

MARK V SHELDON
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since 2001-06-21

Posts 3015
In a corporeal internship...

11 posted 2004-01-25 06:50 PM

I love the gentle rhyme and imagry, Sunshine, and the last stanza grabbed me most. Makes me yearn for some rain -- from the inside looking out, of course...

-MVS

You CAN make a difference:
http://educate-yourself.org/

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

12 posted 2004-01-26 10:26 AM

This is so perfect...in content, style and tenderness.

Eric

NewEnglandlazurlu
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since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

13 posted 2004-01-26 10:49 AM

For this feeling
Inside my soul
Sounds of waiting,
Quiet rebirth
I would dance
Upon the brown
Soon the green
Will cover earth

You had to know I would love every word and thought in this poem!

Huggles in wait .... Marti

I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel
more like I transcribe them. It's just a matter of listening.

Bridget Shenachie
Senior Member

since 2002-01-23

Posts 1056
Kansas USA

14 posted 2004-01-26 09:39 PM

Thank you for marking this day in such beautiful words. It does make this day special!

Shenachie

Denise

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15 posted 2004-01-26 09:47 PM

This is gorgeous, Karilea! Simply gorgeous!

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