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misanthropology Junior Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 17 |
Heard the news today Ran into someone that I knew In the rain A warm embrace A pain transpired The untimely death of an old friend A remembrance A fatal derangement of the senses The chamber was loaded A swift black wind silenced the lambs Everybody to blame What happens to a dream when there's Six feet of separation |
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McLean Member
since 2004-01-05
Posts 484state of marital bliss |
six feet of seperation that makes me think of the "six degrees of seperation" thing...were you inspired to write that particular phrase because of this saying? just curious. sad topic, for sure. McLean |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Oh, I like this....not the subject of the poem, but how you arranged your thoughts... Good poetry....wishing you peace of mind _______ice ><> |
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misanthropology Junior Member
since 2004-01-02
Posts 17 |
John Bria may he rest in peace |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
enjoyed the write. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"A fatal derangement of the senses" nice line...good write |
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