The Truth Shall Set You Free

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Open Poetry #31

The Truth Shall Set You Free

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

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0 posted 2004-02-02 04:56 PM

***Authors Note: This was painful but theraputic for me to write.I hope you enjoy this.****

You called me last night about five or six times.Yours is a voice I did not want to hear, over you, I shed many tears.
You call to tell me you are sorry and that you want to tell me the truth.I already know it though....deep down I've known all along.
You tell me that you are extremely ill....I say I'm sorry but there is nothing that I can or want to do for you.
I want you out of my life.....I have moved on with mine.Please don't bring me anymore dark clouds, I want my sun to shine
You ask if we can still be friends.....I don't know what to say
You can call all you want, I'll never pick the phone up again
It may be to late for you now but I see that you have realised the truth shall set you free

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-02-02 06:18 PM

Very sad and emotional. It's good you can get your feelings out like that. My prayers are with you. Grover.

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

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2 posted 2004-02-02 06:25 PM

Grover,

Thank You.

~Laura~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2004-02-02 06:29 PM

Nice writing...James

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

4 posted 2004-02-02 06:31 PM

This was very emotional. Poetry is good therapy!

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

5 posted 2004-02-02 06:37 PM

James and Iliana,

Thank you for reading! I hope you enjoyed it. Iliana, you are right poetry is good therapy.

Take Care,

~Laura~

McLean
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since 2004-01-05

Posts 484
state of marital bliss

6 posted 2004-02-02 07:45 PM

This seems familiar, and I understand your pain. I hope this release was a good one!

Chin up!

McLean

ParisGrl
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since 2000-06-01

Posts 610

7 posted 2004-02-03 06:33 PM

McLean,

I am trying very hard to keep my chin up.:-)

Take Care,
Laura

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