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MexicoCityBlues Junior Member
since 2004-01-04
Posts 48The Point of Know Return |
“I wanna be the blood that runs in your veins.” god for tomorrow I’d sacrifice today hunny, focus on the breath breathe breathe breathe breathe the breathing is redemption lucid minds, I’m trying… Where is the American Night? lost in a fog so deep she’s here she’s here but she’s there come here (fog horn) tranquil minds locked together turmoil is the key to unlock true love seems like years, old friend dreams we walked steadily. sun ablaze but ice burns these roads today dead trees seems about right mind is at game “can’t find me today!” hands aclasped we drink a coffee dead to the outside dead on the inside she’s here she’s within my grasp but she’s miles away for once images appear slanted out of proportion walls are caving in… no one speaks (what’d a pencil ever do for me I don’t want to be erased…) MOTHER OF GOD PLEASE HELP ME the breathing is redemption I’m trying Eternity is too long. "The story of life is quicker than the wink of an eye. The story of love is Hello and Goodbye. Until we meet again..." -Jimi Hendrix |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
what is this i just experienced? WOW IM BREATHLESS... you got a style i like... awesome way to lead the reader to feel what you need them too... this is really really fantastic...  |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
When I read your work,,,I find it hard to express how I feel,,,,,do deep, lots of passion,,,,best I can say,,is that I do enjoy the works you share Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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lovejunkie Member
since 2003-12-31
Posts 93Indiana |
“I wanna be the blood that runs in your veins.” god for tomorrow I’d sacrifice today ^---great stanza. the first part overshadows the rest if you ask me. still good stuff. "All you need is love..." -The Beatles |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big angel hugs) Yay! This is wonderful, sweet friend, you have such a strong way of expessing yourself! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Carson, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
interesting read. |
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