Open Poetry #31 |
Magic Vine |
wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
Everybody searches for answers with oral pleas plant kernels in the ground from magic peas; sweet dreams travel to the x marked spot likely funneled down a rusty drain slot... What plea will it be tonight as I sleep some wanton mystery to be believed would like truths to be conceived how will that info be received? have a window on the world of the magic vine so that I can wake up and my days will go fine.. Set out to find how the pea shoot grows while in my veins creative blood still flows will it transport me to a cloud shrouded castel? to climb it only to descend is another hassel But I'll always be looking for some release to travel continents in search of magic peas unravel contents of the unsuspecting kind to wake up to a new world on cloud. nine.. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the positive outlook here and the theme is perfect |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"but I'll always be looking for some release to travel continents in search of magic peas unravel contents of the unsuspecting kind to wake up to a new world on cloud nine.." One of your best Martin. Very much enjoyed and into my library it goes. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Is that love I see in your eyes... |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
So very true. I wonder why we look for magic peas? Gives me something to ponder on. Great poem. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, keep looking up and beyond and you will certainly find a crystal castle there, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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