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Not always what it appears to the mirror
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Not always what it appears to the mirror |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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The Beauty of it all the soft rose the gental touch The thorns how they prick my finger so gental like the hand the loves me is raised against me once again the irony of it all when the tall tale becomes not this at all the sweet lovely looks of lust in the eyes decode the error of your intentions that come in so dainty the way the spirt of your soul sends its pleasure to me with its dark colored eyes of deception the teeth of sharp falls of your faith I look away once only to remeber all over again not edited yet as well Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Copperbell Senior Member
since 2003-11-08
Posts 956 |
so sad... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I understand totally |
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Michelle_loves_Mike
since 2003-12-20
Posts 1189Pennsylvania |
touching,,,,I'm looking forward to the edited version, I feel punctuation in the given places, will help in the emphasis of the right lines at the right time, Michelle I wish all could find the true happiness I have found,,in the eyes of Mike |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
Yup it always does I ususally post what i just written fresh and from the soul Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Kie Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 77USA |
Filled with emotion, reflection, and sincerity. Really touches the reader. |
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