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Wish Of You
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Wish Of You |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 blinded by the light, that is the wish of you I feel the heat, I ache to touch yet fingertips search, in vain is it the prayers we pray or the ones unanswered that lead us to our fate destiny, on crash of wave.... It's when I am alone I hear you, taste you on air sighing, crying I breathe you in careful of the wishes made by the heart for sometimes they can never come true..... ~SEA~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh, yes...be so very careful what you wish for... because you might receive it. |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
indeed...be careful with what your heart wishes...nicely done Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Words that speak to me, beautifully written. And then ending holds such truth. Thanks for sharing. Susan |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
SEA...Your words are so gentle and will touch many hearts i'm sure. Enjoyed very much...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Susan....you truly have been missed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Absolutely lovely. Beautiful. JL  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
so beautifully true |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Awesome poem, SEA! |
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