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THEMAGICALMYSTRYOFPOEMS
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0 posted 2004-04-14 12:56 PM



SANDS OF TIME

Loving you
But not being able
To give you

Feeling you
But not touching you

Hearing you
But not seeing you

Wanting you
But not having you

Worlds apart
Seperate lives
Inner souls connected
Hearts beating as one
Majestic meetings
Of the inner body
Soul and mind

Now I wait
Until I can

Give you
Touch you
See you

Until my dreams
Wash upon your shores



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Grover
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1 posted 2004-04-14 12:59 PM


A beautiful image!
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2 posted 2004-04-14 12:59 PM


Very nicely done. Enjoyed. Chris

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HopeS
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3 posted 2004-04-14 02:00 PM


heart to heart , yet oceans apart , yes I understand this so much

Hope

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4 posted 2004-04-15 03:29 AM


it would be nice to see you reply to other people's poetry too

people may be more comfortable replying to yours then too

iliana
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5 posted 2004-04-15 03:33 AM


Nice.......!
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