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12 o'clock |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land 
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The lazy stretch of green: I traversed through its rules. The ornate windows barred me from the codes I kept crossing. Empty, as always. "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Excellent write!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool! |
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wings of the moon Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 323Pink bubblegum land |
Thnaks both of you, i re-wrote it recentely though : The green stretched before me. Carpeted, yellow tinted. I crossed its rules. The windows elegantely opposed their codes. And stayed empty, as always. "more than yesterday, less than tomorrow, i love you" |
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