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Open Poetry #31

A Ying-Yang of Character.

croyles
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since 2004-01-27

Posts 102

0 posted 2004-04-13 08:16 PM

A Ying-Yang of Character:

His counsel soflty smooths my griefs
With fair liberating soothing sounds:
Ever teaching me that lifes not flawless;
Keeping my soul upon the earths hard ground.

But at night shall boiling blood arise,
When I see through strength that bulky form’s
Arrogance; the virtue I despise,
And cannot help my soughts in nights of ethical storms,
Of brutal murder, slaughter till decay;
Rotting his cursed soul through night and day.

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A contrasted plot in free verse. I'm experimenting with different things.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-04-13 10:29 PM

I really liked the first verse!
Sadelite

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