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Falling Rock |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan 
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my life is unstable like a falling rock , down a mountain letting myself get lost in love my stomach is a roller coaster of emotion what gives in this world , so much , too much when i think i am found , she slips a blade in me quiet like a silent snowfall my thoughts are broken , i asked for it as i type the owl awakens outside a sign , his hoot is loud outside my window did she just want to forget his name with mine is that what it is a cover , like a warm blanket i was a pillow for her ...like a fool i gave only my heart and continue to be stuck in between i am not even sure where i am right now where this will lead small movements is what the i Ching told me ...pleasing the spirits is what i will do surrender my life to the world move on down this dusty rocky road knowing the golden fields await me 4/13/2004 ....... JDW III [This message has been edited by aujussy wolf (04-13-2004 01:43 AM).] |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
"I asked for it" Boy, do I know this tune. Love your selection of words and images. I saw them and felt them. Makes me want to read it again.... ~K~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always go with the i Ching |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Kahlil said it for me! good write wolfy, again  |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
you know my thoughts.. i just wanted to leave you another (((hug))) .... because i can *smirk* "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
kahlil...yea that feeling runs deep and so often we were the ones who may have asked for it , lol read it as many times as u want thank you for the nice reply passing shads....your still up too lol i knew you were awake , ty babe the chinger never lies lol ..i use it almost daily ..peace to you too ((((hugs)))) muted , sweet dawny thank you for being such a good hearted cute poet friend always there for me thanks , and ((((hugs)))) toosnow... you made me smile , and now i cant stop lol and the hugs are also just fine with me now i am gonna be all blushy oh well ((((hugs)))) wow that must be magic thanks for the props ((hugs)) wolfy ....... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
"my life is unstable like a falling rock , down a mountain letting myself get lost in love my stomach is a roller coaster of emotion" An avalanche of the truest kind my friend... Yet gravity is both plus and minus in factors, teetering on the edge, resting at the hub... We all must learn to ski the slopes. Your writes are becoming richer in texture. Enjoyed the glimpse into the wandering heart here. TD |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
a wolf "when i think i am found , she slips a blade in me quiet like a silent snowfall my thoughts are broken" The imagery and the depth of this poem are wonderful. Very much enjoyed! |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Good analogy -- enjoyed. A rolling stone gathers no moss.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"small movements is what the i Ching told me ...pleasing the spirits is what i will do surrender my life to the world move on down this dusty rocky road knowing the golden fields await me" ~ hold those thoughts! Golden fields do await you, Dear Poet!  Warm hugs, EA P.S. Love your new and cool pic! |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
TD , ahh the texture gets thicker just wait lol Martie ..thanks , i try to go as far into my mind as i can , thats where the real magic sleeps ...just have to wake it up lol Iliana , no moss here , but dont get me wrong i do like moss lol Earthy , thank you for the warm hug here is one for you ((hug)) glad u like the pic too thanks again ,wolf |
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