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"sensory malfunction"
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"sensory malfunction" |
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Mt Rowley Junior Member
since 2004-01-06
Posts 25United Kingdom |
sensory malfunction Things i take to numb the pain I shouldnt take during the day En-nerved by the busy street my expresion shows a blank sheet Pulse raising, eyes wide My nautiousness i tried to hide The sounds, the sites, the things i feel Its hard to tell if they are real I struggle to speed to my escape I feel my mouth begin to gape The passers by become a haze Im sure they'll see my gaping gaze Back to work i sorely go I really hope my boss wont know These things i take to numb the pain afraid to see that day again |
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Mt Rowley Junior Member
since 2004-01-06
Posts 25United Kingdom |
i wrote this one about a year ago. I dont particularly like it but i'd like to know what others think... I never like my own stuff when it rymes... ta... mart... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
A message worthy to be told. Very good, I enjoyed reading it!  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's a good write, a look at A day in the life of...Rowley. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a good piece yes |
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Mt Rowley Junior Member
since 2004-01-06
Posts 25United Kingdom |
it stands as a reminder to myself of how never to lead my life... |
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