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Secret Love
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Secret Love |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Secret Love I see your words upon the page They seem so warm today You talk of love and the beauty around you I fall in love each time I read I ponder could these words be for me? Your words massage my aching head They wrap around me in warmth like a soft velvet blanket A tear trembles on the brink of falling Knowing within my heart that these words are not for me. You do not know I exist I am a stranger in the realm of poetic beauty Another day has come to pass Your words flow across the page barely brushing my awaiting fingertips. I close my eyes and wonder once again Could this beauty be for me? I wonder? Bon-Bon  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I am a stranger in the realm of poetic beauty HAH, is that ever an understatement, stranger my foot, your a very talented poet, in the realm of poetic beauty, you are poetic beauty...silly girl....don't make me come over there! hehehhehhehe....love to you and yours. And a very beautiful write. Love and hugs...me |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
I feel this way right now bcuz my best friend dosn't see me as a friend anymore she sees me rather as nothing she'd rather for get bout me..I guess I'm alone..I really loved this poem..  Care Hoplessly Romantic |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Dear "stranger in the realm of poetic beauty" ~ NOT! I enjoy reading your beautiful poetry! I can appreciate where you are coming from with this one. Some of the most passionate and beautiful love poetry that a man has ever written for a woman, has graced these blue pages ~ and I like pretending that some of it was written just fer little ole me! lol  Warm hugs 'n smiles, EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is touching...sad |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
awww Bonnie you are no stranger .... but I know what you mean by being caressed by words Hope |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
i often think these things as well...  you always offer a sweet moment in your poetry, even when you write with sadness |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
I have this uncanny perception of the obvious....I take it you're not referring to my poetry?..I can see where it might make you warm and fuzzy...(similar to nausea), but, that's about it hunh?....This is a sweet/sad write...and can't imagine anyone not noticing you, your picture or your poetry..... |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
You touch a chord in me [probably all of us] beautifully......~P |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
So glad everyone liked this one. I was feeling a little blue when I wrote it. I have some germ that is making me feel yucky. Toe you silly I always read your writing and they do make me feel warm and fuzzy cause you are so bad. So far though I only threw up a couple of times.  See Ya Love Bon-Bon |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You always write like you're singing a song. So refreshing!  |
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