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ctowen
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0 posted 2004-04-12 03:11 PM


a break in the clouds
the passing of night
a rise in this moment
in my wayward plight

it begins, this day
from the empty cold
lost behind hidden clouds
with morning's unfold

I search for blue skies
the feeling of you
this healing of heaven
your soul, through and through

but lose once again
as a cloud reforms
tears drown my wayward sun
between stars and storms

One's outlook can be another's expression.
  

© Copyright 2004 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-04-12 03:31 PM


Hi Craig!!
Very soft and heartfelt write. Enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Grover
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2 posted 2004-04-12 03:51 PM


Very, very nice!
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3 posted 2004-04-12 04:13 PM


softly written sadness/loss, very nice
jwesley
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4 posted 2004-04-12 04:15 PM


nicely done... enjoyed

jwesley

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5 posted 2004-04-12 05:35 PM


A sadness wonderfully expressed.

Enjoyed.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

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6 posted 2004-04-13 03:21 AM


between stars and storms, there is a dance


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7 posted 2004-04-14 09:52 AM


between stars and storms there is light.....hugsss you miss you much....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-04-14 10:24 AM


I search for blue skies
the feeling of you
this healing of heaven
your soul, through and through


  keep on and never ever give up
Beautiful!

choshi
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9 posted 2004-04-14 11:19 AM


Beautiful....You capture a feeling in my recent experience of endless gray skies, broken only by rain and an occasional glimpse of sun....and bring into the language if the heart...Thank you `P
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