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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2004-04-12 03:11 PM

a break in the clouds
the passing of night
a rise in this moment
in my wayward plight

it begins, this day
from the empty cold
lost behind hidden clouds
with morning's unfold

I search for blue skies
the feeling of you
this healing of heaven
your soul, through and through

but lose once again
as a cloud reforms
tears drown my wayward sun
between stars and storms

One's outlook can be another's expression.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

1 posted 2004-04-12 03:31 PM

Hi Craig!!

Very soft and heartfelt write. Enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

2 posted 2004-04-12 03:51 PM

Very, very nice!

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

3 posted 2004-04-12 04:13 PM

softly written sadness/loss, very nice

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2004-04-12 04:15 PM

nicely done... enjoyed

jwesley

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-04-12 05:35 PM

A sadness wonderfully expressed.

Enjoyed.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-04-13 03:21 AM

between stars and storms, there is a dance

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

7 posted 2004-04-14 09:52 AM

between stars and storms there is light.....hugsss you miss you much....

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-04-14 10:24 AM

I search for blue skies
the feeling of you
this healing of heaven
your soul, through and through

keep on and never ever give up
Beautiful!

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-04-14 11:19 AM

Beautiful....You capture a feeling in my recent experience of endless gray skies, broken only by rain and an occasional glimpse of sun....and bring into the language if the heart...Thank you `P

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