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Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

0 posted 2004-04-12 04:36 PM

Free Spirits

burdens filled both shoes
horses, oxen, asses struggled
over rough terrain

to the free-way.

two centuries passed
airplanes, trains, busses rip
across yielding ways

all of us poets and free spirits.

©2004 Grover Gall

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

1 posted 2004-04-12 04:50 PM

I'll drink to free "spirits" any old time....nice write..

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-04-13 03:27 AM

I'm with Toe

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

3 posted 2004-04-13 07:37 AM

(I wish she was with toe)....

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

4 posted 2004-04-13 08:32 AM

I'm still in a coma, cannot seem to wake up this a.m., but very much enjoyed this read...Hiya and happy Tues. hope you had a wonderful Easter.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-04-13 08:39 AM

Very interesting write Grover..
One to certainly ponder on this dreary Tuesday.
Hope your Easter was a good one.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

6 posted 2004-04-13 03:11 PM

blah they took all the good things to say...good job

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2004-04-13 03:29 PM

Two centuries just passed before me in one blink of mine eye! lol

~ To poets & free spirits!

EA

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2004-04-13 03:30 PM

Wonderful poetry Grover. Enjoyed the vision from past to present, as free spirits.
JL

choshi
Senior Member

since 2004-01-01

Posts 1184
New York

9 posted 2004-04-14 11:20 AM

REALLY NICE ! ~p

Copperbell
Senior Member

since 2003-11-08

Posts 956

10 posted 2004-04-14 11:41 AM

Makes a person think - let your brain go back a few hundred thousand years - no one could have fathomed the things that we take for granted. Good thought this mornin', just in time to go to work. Thanks Grover

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

11 posted 2004-04-14 11:45 AM

We have struggled to get to where we are today only to find we wish for a simpler time. Good one Grover.
Bon-Bon

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