Open Poetry #31 |
Miles between us |
sea_of_okc Senior Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 568Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
All these miles between us Are like a knife stuck in my heart All these miles between us Conspire to keep us two apart Yet how much more precious Does it make the time we share The moments we are together Overflow with love and care How wonderful do you feel As I gently caress your face Your lips press against mine As our hearts begin to race Our bodies tightly twined As our passion starts to mount Knowing our time is short We make every second count So full of love and joy For an awesome couple days We try to drink our fill Before we go our separate ways All these miles between us Cannot change my love for you All these miles between us Will be erased with one "I do" Steven Seaman |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Steven~ All these miles between us Cannot change my love for you All these miles between us Will be erased with one "I do" Oh .... this is so lovely ...~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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seaslady Junior Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 43 |
You Steve... are the most amazing man I have ever known.... Thanks.... from the bottom of my heart and soul.... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very very lovely... and it looks as though you have touched her heart. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
It seems that in your case "distance" makes the heart grow fonder! May you two, do the "I do", and bring two hearts close forever! A very sweet and tender write! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
lucky lady |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Simply lovely. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
wishing for the world to fold in on itself long enough for you two to whisp each other away! beautiful |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I think everyone at pip should be invited.. Road Trip! and..the words were beautifully bound together. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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