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sea_of_okc
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0 posted 2004-04-13 09:44 AM



All these miles between us
Are like a knife stuck in my heart
All these miles between us
Conspire to keep us two apart

Yet how much more precious
Does it make the time we share
The moments we are together
Overflow with love and care

How wonderful do you feel
As I gently caress your face
Your lips press against mine
As our hearts begin to race

Our bodies tightly twined
As our passion starts to mount
Knowing our time is short
We make every second count

So full of love and joy
For an awesome couple days
We try to drink our fill
Before we go our separate ways

All these miles between us
Cannot change my love for you
All these miles between us
Will be erased with one "I do"

Steven Seaman

You never lose by loving. You always lose by holding back.
--Barbara DeAngelis

© Copyright 2004 Steven Thomas Seaman - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2004-04-13 10:20 AM


Steven~

All these miles between us
Cannot change my love for you
All these miles between us
Will be erased with one "I do"


Oh .... this is so lovely ...~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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seaslady
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2 posted 2004-04-13 10:54 AM


You Steve... are the most amazing man I have ever known.... Thanks.... from the bottom of my heart and soul....
Enchantress
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3 posted 2004-04-13 10:57 AM


Very very lovely...
and it looks as though you have touched her heart.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2004-04-13 03:05 PM


It seems that in your case "distance" makes the heart grow fonder! May you two, do the "I do", and bring two hearts close forever!

A very sweet and tender write!


EA

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5 posted 2004-04-14 03:09 AM


lucky lady
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6 posted 2004-04-14 06:54 AM


Simply lovely.  
muted
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7 posted 2004-04-14 10:09 AM


wishing for the world to fold in on itself long enough for you two to whisp each other away!
beautiful

Susan Caldwell
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8 posted 2004-04-14 08:30 PM


I think everyone at pip should be invited..

Road Trip!

and..the words were beautifully bound together.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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