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Staring at the sun....
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Staring at the sun.... |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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April the last month you reciprocated I knew the sun-dew reminded me of someone The last time I knew you loved me. Making my excuses, silent excuses escaping to greener fields with you I were a fool to the sunlight. Grasping at rays that could not hold me only burn me. This April day was a reminder once of finer things and now of how the strength of sun was blinding keeping me close and humble to such skin. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hello, LittleOne,  It's so good to see you.  I miss you and love you lots. Hugs, my sweet Gemma  Ethel Mae |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice  |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Just lovely! hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This April day was a reminder once of finer things the entire poem was beautifully written, but Gem....those lines did it for me...hugged me warm and snug. Excellent write |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely Gemma...so very much enjoyed. Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
pure gold , with hints of your heart ...luv your passion plays -wolfmon xo |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Grasping at rays that could not hold me only burn me." ~ My dear sweet Gem Drop, all that glitters, is not gold ~ except when it comes to your poetry!   Lindy Lou |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hey this one shines Gem , your words gave it the special glow Hope |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Grasping at rays that could not hold me only burn me. yes so true, the same sky that brings he devastgation of storms, who knows where the time goes, who knows wehre the time goes |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
nice metaphor...conjures up some very vivid images...well-written |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
there are always reminders of finer things |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
"The last time I knew you loved me." Gemma... oh those words are heart wrenching.. and wonderfully written.  "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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