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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-12 11:32 PM



My Heart In Jump


you start
this weakness
it all begins
in knees
a tremble
that ripples
on the skin
of flat water
nothing that grows
larger as it
goes out
a once
silent sound
turned up
in flow

"It's ok, you will be alright, it will just take some time." unknown

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-04-13 02:38 AM


does he have a brother?
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2 posted 2004-04-13 11:31 AM


"a tremble
that ripples
on the skin"

beautiful!

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3 posted 2004-04-13 01:20 PM


Love this Helen.  hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Grover
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4 posted 2004-04-13 04:43 PM


Helen, your "quantity" of writing certainly does not lack in "quality." A very good write!
Dark Angel
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5 posted 2004-04-13 05:01 PM


Wondermous.. I love it.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

gemjop
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6 posted 2004-04-13 05:54 PM


silent sound
turned up
in flow

!!!!!!!!!!

speaking volumes here H.

This is passionate..

another for my library.


Susan
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7 posted 2004-04-13 06:02 PM


Like this, sigh.

Susan

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8 posted 2004-04-13 06:34 PM


The magical touch!
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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