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Open Poetry #31

My Heart In Jump

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-12 11:32 PM

My Heart In Jump

you start
this weakness
it all begins
in knees
a tremble
that ripples
on the skin
of flat water
nothing that grows
larger as it
goes out
a once
silent sound
turned up
in flow

"It's ok, you will be alright, it will just take some time." unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-04-13 02:38 AM

does he have a brother?

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2004-04-13 11:31 AM

"a tremble
that ripples
on the skin"

beautiful!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2004-04-13 01:20 PM

Love this Helen. hugs, Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-04-13 04:43 PM

Helen, your "quantity" of writing certainly does not lack in "quality." A very good write!

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

5 posted 2004-04-13 05:01 PM

Wondermous.. I love it.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2004-04-13 05:54 PM

silent sound
turned up
in flow

!!!!!!!!!!

speaking volumes here H.

This is passionate..

another for my library.

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

7 posted 2004-04-13 06:02 PM

Like this, sigh.

Susan

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2004-04-13 06:34 PM

The magical touch!
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

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