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Too Much Left Unsaid (Corrected )
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Too Much Left Unsaid (Corrected ) |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia 
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Too Much Is Left Unsaid Nothing much changes He writes occasionally Explains for his silence Returns with an apology I had heard it all before Yet I happily accepted It was another apology The same as I expected Intended with purpose My heart to captivate He knows me too well Another apology I await The breaking of silence Sorry sent to appease Attempts to keep unity Apolgies aim to please Too much is left unsaid Having so little contact Aplogising repeatedly Can only be hiding fact Hope©2004 |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
This is proof that all we experince can be turned to poetry...and beautifuly so. Eric |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Hope, This is so good. I got to the last stanza, where you stunned me with your words. I enjoyed. Writing seems so easy for you. Sadie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quit settling for sorry walk on! Head high! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Quite the summation in poetic language....I'd say it covers a lot of the space that becomes a problem... Love these lines "Aplogising repeatedly Can only be hiding fact" Good write! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very, very well done Hope...could really feel your heart. jwesley |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
HopeS Who would know best? Enjoyed |
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inspiredpoetwriter Member
since 2002-01-05
Posts 104Minnesota |
Hi! I really enjoyed this poem very well done my friend..keep writing   Care Hoplessly Romantic |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
good friend of mine told me once, if it don't come easy let it go...He was right! You pine away over spilled milk for months, before you know it it's years....and you know something, if it's like that now, if you had him in your life, it would be even worse....so....move on...you deserve much better. A beautiful write...filled with who you are...a wonderful person who deserves to be appreciated and loved with decency and respect. Smiles and big hugs sent your way... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You are sweetness personified, dear Hope. All that apologising could make you weary. And maybe you could look ahead. Very beautifully written. Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
How sad, yet well expressed. Susan |
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