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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

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Between the Lines

0 posted 2004-04-12 10:53 AM

Pressing my face to the windowpane,
watching the droplets run unevenly
wondering how the stretch
of their existence would feel,
as they journey to the bottom.

Too light to make the pitter-patter sounds.
Instead, only the sloshing noise
of cars traveling by.

Rainy Days and Mondays, my favorites,
allowing me to excuse myself under the covers,
hiding from the outside stimuli
that is a constant irk to my mood.

Today I am not worthy
of any discourse on life.
Faithful to myself alone,
I shall forget all promises,
finding myself in second place today,
watching the rain trickling down.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

1 posted 2004-04-12 10:57 AM

No rain here, but I know the feeling!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2004-04-12 11:26 AM

hmmmm .... did you look deeply into my eyes?
... and reflect my thoughts?

Very rainy here too .... and for once I am the lazy one enjoying just to be.

You have created a lovely poem.

Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-04-12 11:45 AM

Maureen,
A little rest is good. Good write.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-04-12 11:57 AM

forget all promises

yeah

sigh

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-04-12 12:04 PM

MzWynter~

'allowing me to excuse myself under the covers'

Oh, how I LOVE this thought~

Rained all night here ... and continued until about an hour ago ... now the sun is gracing my day~
Love ya'
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-04-12 01:00 PM

I love rainy days...come on over for a cup of tea.

Sunny here....but cool.
Hugs~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-04-12 01:14 PM

Excellent poem! Like the rainy days too!
JL

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

8 posted 2004-04-13 02:51 PM

I could picture it...
perfectly.
It'd be so nice to forget all promises
for just awhile.
I like this.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2004-04-13 02:54 PM

brilliant read....and made me want to go home and get under the covers, Gwad it's still raining here....damp and raw...best place to be right now is in front of a fireplace with a great book...or, your hubby, if you've got one???? I'll settle for a really good book....hehehehhehe

Very lovely read!

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

10 posted 2004-04-13 02:57 PM

"Rainy Days and Mondays, my favorites,
allowing me to excuse myself under the covers,
hiding from the outside stimuli
that is a constant irk to my mood."

~ That is exactly the kind of day that I have been having! I snuggled under my comforter and shut the world out while listening to the raindrops fall! Ah, so peaceful!
You are one of Pip's Queens of Mood setting!

Warming hugs on a cool, rainy day,
EA

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

11 posted 2004-04-13 03:03 PM

M~ and monday, tuesday, and whats looking like wednesday yet! Am tired of the rain sometimes, and other times I welcome it.
Very well done. Hugs. Can you believe this kid of mine turns 12 tomorrow! Geez...
Me thinks, I'm gettin old....lmao!

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

12 posted 2004-04-13 06:37 PM

  Grover,  well it is tomorrow since I wrote this and it is still raining and will at least  until tomorrow...it does make you  moody though, *s

Thank you,  Margherita ...these days make you feel lazy..but it's awful to have to go out into it  job hunting.

  Sy, a little rest is always welcome...but it must be my age...this weather though needed puts an unrest on my mood.

Dixie, yes..sometimes promises need to be forgotten or delayed a day or two.

  Margie, well it always rains in Florida..for a short while and then the sun begins to shine...I had to chase a bird off my front porch and remove its beautiful nest today..it was in the way of my front door overhang and I was being  "flown at" everytime I entered or left the house...no  eggs in it though ..   feeling guilty now..



Nancy,  tea sounds wonderful...I can barely stay awake on days like this.


  JL, thank you for the visit

Alyssa, some days it is nice to sit back and not worry about a thing...I wonder if I will ever see those days again

  LeeJ, I am in PA too..southern part near the Maryland line ..I think all of PA is getting rain today...and that hubby?  He lives in the barn for now...*smiling*
I ran out of firewood  2 weeks ago, so no fire for me...


   Linda,  that was yesterday for me..today I was forced to go out in the heavier rains...and there is another day of it to come ~sighing~


  Donna,  I can't believe April will be 12...growing up so fast. Wish her a happy birthday for me..some day we will get together and enjoy a  peaceful day...I still recall the beautiful ride to Carlisle and  the park where we chatted...I have to smile at all those  on here who feel they are  getting old..when I am  about 10-15 years older than them...now that is getting old

M

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