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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-04-12 10:58 PM

Clear Spelling Lessons

I use to think
you charmed me
but your spells
are starting
to come
completely undone
listening to your
magical incantations
these mere words
clearly can not
come close to hold me
over and over again
I read each letter
their order confused
unacceptable in use
as things wrap up
and colorful cellophane
looks so beautiful
but still rattles
transparently

"It's ok, you will be alright, it will just take some time." unknown

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

1 posted 2004-04-13 01:52 AM

yes, I agree...and Im feeling a bit this way today.
enjoyed this

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-04-13 02:20 AM

hope you are okay

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

3 posted 2004-04-13 05:14 AM

and colorful cellophane
looks so beautiful
but still rattles
transparently

Yes....it's easily seen through.

Well said.

Maree

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

Grover
Senior Member

since 2004-01-27

Posts 1967
London, ON, Canada

4 posted 2004-04-13 11:08 AM

I've been trying to reply to your email but it bounces back. In reply to your query I write--

I see and admire the creativity of your work. Your style is unique, and to me, it stands out from other work at PIP. I do not write like you and perhaps therein lies the reason: I'd like to. The best to you, God bless you. Keep writing!

This is the addy that bounces back--

[edit]

Grover Gall.

[This message has been edited by muted (04-13-2004 04:54 PM).]

jellybeans
Member Elite

since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

5 posted 2004-04-13 11:21 AM

yep I know this one, wrote one called the whispering wind, different metaphor same emotion, when you stop whispering your wishes for the wind to echo back, the wind is silent, it had nothing real to say...sigh...

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2004-04-13 06:00 PM

I read each letter
their order confused
unacceptable in use
as things wrap up

This reminded me of something personal to me.

So thanks.

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