| Open Poetry #31 |
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In Empty Hands |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
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Nightshade![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
This is beautiful Dawn. You have such an ease with words. hugs, Chris thankyou so much for being so attentive during this Moderation - I have to put this swollen foot up every once in awhile, so I haven't always been available here. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Empty hands are not deplete, You have an angel's face You have a child that has his mother's looks, You've been blessed with grace.... |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
Chris, you keep those sore tootsies elevated...and i feel even with the complication of a hurt foot...you are doing a mighty fine job moderating! Thank you ![]() Toerag!! you slipped in there...you sweetie! almost brought me to tears...thank you ![]() |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
How wonderful and full these words of the bravest heart. Bravo. TD |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Very nice! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very beautiful! Great write. JL ![]() |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Profound write, accompanied by the perfect picture! I really like this. Sadie |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
PERFECT! Keeping this. Maree ![]() Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow! That is just so cool! Eric |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Fantastic Dawn!! Straight into my library with this gem! Hugs~ To have lived the dream of a love so true... |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"exposed the roots of wisdom grown" Very powerful line, love the poem.... ![]() ______ice ><> |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Exceptionally poetic, however, dear poetess, you hold the wisdom of a sage and many blessings in thy empty hands! ![]() Love & Light, Linda |
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MovesInSilence Member
since 2004-03-21
Posts 111Perth, Australia |
just love the way you write going to have to add this to my collection. |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
![]() thanks you guys, your comments mean more to me than you realize ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! I have no other word |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Well, young lady, you shine! It's empty hands that capture the most precious gifts. Love, Margherita ![]() |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
A soul full and soulfull... you see the world -- and touch the world |
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Greeneyes![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
dear...in understanding ~~**~~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely and compassionate heart you have...a wonderful write |
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muted![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
to all of you for all of the support you give |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
empty hands can mean you are poised and ready to hold the world |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Wow! Dawn, you have said so much in so few words and have stirred up so many feelings. And, these images you have been posting are jsut incredible.... ~P |
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