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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-04-13 01:59 PM


When our hearts are together
looking out over the horizons
of tomorrow,
a certain kind of peace
fills my soul~

The tick tock of time
stands still
as I am held in your embrace,
together we stand
upon the shores of the future~

Each drop of golden sunlight
seems that much brighter,
every sip
from the cup of life
tastes vintage~

We dance
in sunsets glow,
placing our dreams
in the hands
of destiny~

Like an angel
sent from heaven
you warm a spirit
that had seemingly had
forgotten how to fly~

Oceans of blue
can not compare
to the depths
of your eyes
when you gaze
into my heart~

Each touch
a cherished moment
that can not slip away
with the passing of time~

To simply hear
you whisper my name~
to be held in your love~

Each moment spent with you
leaves me
~breathless~


{repost by request.}



It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-04-13 02:02 PM



I remember this...and I'm glad it was requested again.  It's a beautiful writing...


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2 posted 2004-04-13 02:09 PM


Oh, how beautiful !!
Thankyou for reposting this Donna.
hugs, Chris

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2004-04-13 02:12 PM


Your words just brought back breathless moments of my own! Thanks, Donna!

Loving hugs,
Linda

iliana
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4 posted 2004-04-13 02:14 PM


Donna, this was a really beautiful and reflects your love!  
inkedgoddess
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5 posted 2004-04-13 10:34 PM


as beautiful as the first time i am sure

passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-04-14 02:54 AM


very romantic indeed
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7 posted 2004-04-14 02:58 AM


To simply hear
you whisper my name~
to be held in your love~

Each moment spent with you
leaves me
~breathless~


Sweet Donna, I feel this too, for my love.
I'll bet you kne I'd say that. LOL
Hugs,
Ethel


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8 posted 2004-04-14 09:34 AM


beauty both inside  and out....

heart hugssss miss your smile 'round here

~~**~~
The sound of silence calls,
I hear your voice and suddenly
I'm falling, lost in a dream
The echo of our souls meet
~~**~~

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9 posted 2004-04-14 09:57 AM


*sweetly sighing*
soo nice

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-04-14 10:56 AM


Oh, I raise my glass to you dear one.
Such is a special love, and I celebrate that feeling too.

Smiles,
TD

So glad for another chance to read this.

choshi
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11 posted 2004-04-14 11:00 AM


Lovely, stirs up gratitude...~P
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