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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2004-04-13 01:32 AM


And he sings
a song of thrush
heathers
know the worth of it
diversity
of feathers pinned
as every arc
of curvature
defined
by bend of spine
in hand--
every hair
a page of mend

bonded

there

as if pretend

cradling the breeze...  ascends!



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Dark Angel
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1 posted 2004-04-13 01:39 AM


It's magic when you allow us to see through your eyes and within you Gorgeous.



Maree.

Beauty of the world which is soon to perish has two edges, one of laughter and one of anguish, cutting the heart asunder.
(by Virginia Woolf)

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2004-04-13 02:24 AM


a different light on you

looks good

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-04-13 09:09 AM


Beautiful!!

Love ya lady~

To have lived the dream of a love so true...
   is to have seen a glimpse of heaven.

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2004-04-13 10:22 AM


heathers
know the worth of it
diversity
of feathers pinned
as every arc
of curvature
defined
by bend of spine
in hand--
every hair
a page of mend

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I take Benadryl and get sleepy...you take it and breathe poetry. You do know how cool this one is, right?

Home is a feeling I buried in you ...
I'm alright, I'm alright ... It only hurts when I breathe ...

M.E.

iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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USA
5 posted 2004-04-13 11:14 AM


Sheer MAGIC! ! !
Martie
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California
6 posted 2004-04-13 11:30 AM


Karen

This is amazingly beautiful...IWIHWI!!!  

Nightshade
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just out of reach
7 posted 2004-04-13 01:18 PM


Perfect Karen!
And....my daughter's name is Heather.
hugs, Chrislane

   Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
                                          Hans Christian Anderson

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
8 posted 2004-04-13 02:27 PM



As misty as an April morn...
a loving write, this is...
thank you, Serenity...

Local Rebel
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since 1999-12-21
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Southern Abstentia
9 posted 2004-04-13 07:38 PM


ah to take wing... must be spring...

lovely write

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