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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Re: Memories M. Freeman A daughter and a dad, eating in the photograph. Giggling the child poses, knowing her fingers are his bunny ears. He smiles unaware. This is the last together forever. (Written the day after last Easter from looking at a photograph. The girl died at the Ronald McDonald House on Easter Day. Keep the children in your thoughts and prayers.) |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Oh, my how terribly sad. hugs, Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
This is so sad... But so real. I go to a place called Dorenbecher Children's Hospital for a lot of my medical care. When I step in there are children all around me who are dying. It's so overwhelming to know that this sort of thing happens everyday. Well done writing of it... Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Very touching, beautifully written. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how very sad...touching write |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Thoughtful, warm and caring. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PictureMe~ So sad ... but a poignant recall~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Tearing at the strings of my heart, Yet this must be written of Such a sad story, yet it is real... Makes me realign my thoughts. Thank you pictureme.... _______ice ><> |
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pictureme Member
since 2003-11-28
Posts 248Ohio, USA |
Nightshade thanks for your comment and hugs... GG health issues can be so trying on ones soul and yet with children seems more unfair. Keep up your faith. Ms. froggy hello....miss you in chat. passing shadow a poem in itself..passing shadow!  thanks for the comment Grover thanks for feeling the positive of the negative! Marge thanks for your comments, poignant is the perfect word of I was trying to achieve. :-) Ice thanks for the poetic comment in itself! Thanks for helping me find my way back to pip! thanks for everyones encouragement to write. Keep keeping poetry alive! |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
pictureme, Such pleasure mixed with so much agony. And so nicely blended. I won't forget...  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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