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Ravenwolfvoyager Member
since 2003-12-25
Posts 326 |
Wow there are a lot of people here with a Native American Indian Heritage. It's really something to hear all of your stories and your backgrounds. This is for those who shared their stories. Marge, Noah, Passing Shadows, Iliana, Garysgirl, ARH, Sunshine, Magnus, inkedgoddess, NewEnglandlazurlu, and anyone else that I missed. (Great Warrior) I am the light of the clouds and the rain in the air; My feathers spiral from the staircase of heavens lair, I am the mysterious voice from troubled times past, And the earth under the fields of orchard wheat grass. I am the teardrop from a cloud upon the warriors grave, And the shadow that charges before the riding brave, I am the setting sun that kisses the earth’s gentle hand, And a blanket of petals that lay over the mother land. I am the spirit of the thunderbird that encircles thy path, And the protector against the coyote’s cunning wrath. I am the wayward trail that leads to the highest rock. And the seeing behind the keen eyes of the hawk. I am the remembrance of your ancestral struggled past, And the journey on the trail of tears until the very last. I am with you from the beginning until the end, For I am the ancestral drum of your heart that beats within. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Bravo!!! Simply EXCELLENT. TD |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Beautiful and true. I'm saving this one. ~K~ |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kcumigwe'c Potawatomi...thank you very much! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 Thank you Jeff! ~ARh  love and hugs Open your eyes, open your mind, open your heart, let me come in and show you love.....~ARH |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Your message is strong, of a people that are very enchanting to us all. For I too share the native blood of those that stood before us. |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Exquisite, excellent! Grover. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh Jeff.... this touches me deep thank you ...into my library! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is superb, my friend. *S* |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent....powerful and much enjoyed!! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Whatever our souls are made of, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriendMyFriend~ You write with the heart of a warrior ...~ This is the touch of you that I love the bestest~ Honest Injun ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i believe there's a bit of the spirit in me too as i do feel this beat myself |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big angel hugs) God Bless You, dearest friend, you speak with utmost compassion for our people and yours, and you truly are a thunderbird who bellows the songs of the spirits! (sigh) This is precious, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "You'll find something that's enough to keep you |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ravenwolfvoyager No Indian in me, but I do recognize a good write when I read one. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Jeff As usual, my words could never do justice to this amazing piece of writing. Your words are always so much appreciated by so many people and I hope this encourages you to continue pursuing your wonderful talent. Your words have touched so many hearts here, my friend. Take care.......Sue I am in motion |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
This is an outstanding, excellent, brilliant write passed from the ancients to you. I hope you will continue to write from the heart of a warrior. I have less than a smidge of Native American blood but this piece touched it in a very big way. Hugs, Marti I take no credit for my poems. Although I write them, I feel |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
"I am the remembrance of your ancestral struggled past, And the journey on the trail of tears until the very last. I am with you from the beginning until the end, For I am the ancestral drum of your heart that beats within." Your words are incredible and true. (My husband who drums, tells me of a spiritual unity that comes from the drum's heartbeat. He is not of Native American birth, but is learning of its wisdom.) I enjoyed this very much and will pass it on to him. Sadelite |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Thank You, Jeff!! Ethel  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jeff~ This ... this ... is the one of the reasons you are missed~ Please return to the fire-circle~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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