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Red Sky in Morning (attempt at a blues song, thanks to Eric )
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Red Sky in Morning (attempt at a blues song, thanks to Eric ) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia 
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Red sky in morning The writer takes warning The day might be rough When you’ve had enough And restless waves of thought Crash upon the shores of naught And the tide is changing With each heartbeat’s pound Red sky of mourning Writer takes warning Heads back for a quieter sound * a work in progress, not progressing as well as I had hoped for...  inspired by Eric's TRUE blues song |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good start, Kacy...very good start! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great start! Keep on it! Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 thanks Karileaand Eric...special thank you, for giving me the courage to put the red onto the blue |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
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