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Open Poetry #31

a place called denial

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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california

0 posted 2004-03-29 12:22 PM

every day he takes me
to his place called denial
a land of deceit
a battle not worthwhile
a place where
only lies grow
sounds that no other
should know
where he
is strong
where he
claims no wrong
even the
strongest love
is given
a lies shove
no place to run
no where to hide
when he takes you
to denial
his land of false pride

Snow

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since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

1 posted 2004-03-29 01:09 AM

hmm, and here i thought i was the only one who the knew this "land" :-)

well said!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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2 posted 2004-03-29 02:25 AM

Sad.....

passing shadows
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displaced

3 posted 2004-03-29 04:12 AM

they are quite good at schmoozing, aren't they?

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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4 posted 2004-03-29 10:24 AM

oh yes they are.

thanks for replies

Grover
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since 2004-01-27

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London, ON, Canada

5 posted 2004-03-29 11:51 AM

Marsha, you express yourself very well. Your poems are now much better-- very well polished and well-written. I think this poem is excellent!

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2004-03-29 12:07 PM

MGROVES
A good strong write, enjoyed.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

7 posted 2004-03-29 01:31 PM

Very well said. Enjoyed this. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

ChemicalRepose
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8 posted 2004-04-02 11:48 PM

Interesting.

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

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9 posted 2004-04-09 08:04 AM

thankyou all for you replies

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