Open Poetry #31 |
a place called denial |
MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
every day he takes me to his place called denial a land of deceit a battle not worthwhile a place where only lies grow sounds that no other should know where he is strong where he claims no wrong even the strongest love is given a lies shove no place to run no where to hide when he takes you to denial his land of false pride |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
hmm, and here i thought i was the only one who the knew this "land" :-) well said! "yet each man kills the thing he loves |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Sad..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
they are quite good at schmoozing, aren't they? |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh yes they are. thanks for replies |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
Marsha, you express yourself very well. Your poems are now much better-- very well polished and well-written. I think this poem is excellent! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES A good strong write, enjoyed. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very well said. Enjoyed this. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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ChemicalRepose Member
since 2004-03-28
Posts 102 |
Interesting. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all for you replies |
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