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MGROVES
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0 posted 2004-04-09 09:04 AM




there is this feeling
deep inside
a secret you carry
you must hide
love that is suppose
to be mine
given to another
forbidden time
refuse to see or feel
what's in front of you
satisfy a need
another you do
take another chance
don't throw what's real away
refuse to see
who you hurt every day
was it worth it
or do you care
throwing out my love
(along with the others
when your greed grows stronger)
like it's just dirty underwear!


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Toerag
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1 posted 2004-04-09 09:26 AM


Yea...good write...know the feeling...I had this gal that cut me down to once a month...(she cut some of my friends off all together)..then, I found out she was running around with six other guys, wouldn't return my calls, refused to see me, so I got rid of her...
MGROVES
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2 posted 2004-04-09 09:45 AM


thanks, ive had 13 years of it. makes me feel kinda stupid when i write it and see it in front of me. thanks for the replies.
once a month, luckier than me, i was if lucky once a year


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3 posted 2004-04-09 02:29 PM


Good write, Marsha!
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4 posted 2004-04-09 02:35 PM


maybe it's time for Spring cleaning, ey?
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