Open Poetry #31 |
Birth |
wordwizard Member
since 2003-09-08
Posts 483on the way to next world |
A signal from above, a brief renewal baby girl has me enter into perusal spring buds open with national upheavals sap flows detract from necessary evils Time sees passages to uncharted worlds flags planted in soils are then unfurled. In hospitals around, a cry breaks the night a infant sister comes into daylight; spring is in the air, a life is born from a womb a new tale is torn... From the life that leaves, another replaces from corporal exits, there enters new faces is this a somber view of lives that breathe what can I learn when buds yield to leaves? Cause I see the march of time, how it passes see repetitions emerge from sadistic masses; as each insists their cause is right a birth is quashed, laid out of sight.. And into this world a child is born from a womb its cord is torn, baby girl, whose mother is pleased will witness changes on the seven seas... © Copyright 2004 ecrivan [This message has been edited by wordwizard (04-10-2004 01:39 AM).] |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very interesting piece. Well done. Chris Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A good solid write, Ecrivan... IWIHWT... |
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Grover Senior Member
since 2004-01-27
Posts 1967London, ON, Canada |
You're living up to your name, Wordwizard. |
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